Simple fixes for common editing mistakes

You’ve written a book. Or an article, a blog post, or another version of prose content. You’ve tweaked it until your eyes crossed and sent it for feedback, confident it conveys your story or message.

Except…you still see those pesky grammar and spelling error indicators in your digital document, and your review team is leaving notes that say, “run global edits.”

We’ve all been there. Many people say this is their least favorite part of the creation process. However, you can use some simple tricks to streamline the revision slog, polish your copy—and not lose your sanity while doing it.

Globals, or global corrections

Also called global edits, “running globals” is the fast way to find and replace multiple instances of commonly misspelled, misused, or unnecessary words and phrases.

It applies to most forms of writing and is particularly handy for book manuscripts and other long-form content. You can also have content- or author-specific globals, but as the terms imply, they’re more focused than the ones covered here.

blank Find and Replace screenshot

Note: this technique assumes that your software has a Find and Replace or Advanced Find and Replace feature. Microsoft Word, OpenOffice, LibreOffice, and most other office suite products do. TextEdit, Notes, blog platforms, and specialty writing programs might not.

Ready? Let’s dive into some of the most common mistakes and how to change them in only a few clicks.

Editing Replacements and Corrections

Errors to replace globally

FindReplace
forwardsforward
towardstoward
backwardsbackward
onwardsonward
upwardsupward
looked tolooked at
looked over tolooked at
looked to beappeared to be
replied backreplied
smiled tosmiled at
smiled to himself/herselfsmiled
alright
(NOT A WORD!)
all right
(Match Case, often at the beginning of a sentence but not always)
fell/knelt/squatted/crouched downfell/knelt/squatted/crouched
nodded his/her headnodded
waved his/her handswaved
folded/crossed his arms over his chest
(or her arms)
folded/crossed his arms
(or her arms)
Double space (hit the space bar twice)Single space (hit the space bar once)
^t (tab)Blank (don’t put anything in)
^l (soft return)^p (paragraph break)
^p^p then try ^p ^p (with a space between)^p

Go through these with a Find Next and Replace if needed (occasionally, it’s correct as it stands)

FindReplace
wrapped upwrapped
opened upopened
turned/spun/whirled aroundturned/spun/whirled
it’sits (situationally)
called outcalled, unless “I feel called out” or something similar
stood upstood, unless “stood up to bullies” or something similar
stand upstand (see qualifier for “stood”)
.” H or .” S or .” T,” h or s or t
(use Match Case) (happens in dialogue tags)
!” H or S or T!” h or s or t
(use Match Case) (occurs in dialogue tags)
,”.”
E.g., “Blah blah blah,” he smiled s/b “Blah blah blah.” He smiled.
Make sure you’re using a dialogue verb (smirked and sighed are not)
Ellipses have no space after unless it starts a new sentence.

Globals in action

Now that we have the lists, here’s an example of a global find and replace in action. In this instance, the search phrase “nodded his head” pulled up four matches. Since this is an automatic correction rather than situational, typing “nodded” in the Replace bar and tapping “Replace All” will fix all four instances with one click.

screenshot of a global Find and Replace example
Example: global “Find and Replace All”

If you need to Match Case, the gear icon next to “Find” gives you that option, plus other advanced features.

(Note: screenshots reflect the layout in Word for Mac, Office 365. The PC interface for Word, Office 365 is a popup window under Advanced Find and Replace with separate tabs for “Find” and “Replace.”)

Next is a situational global (Find Next and Replace) for “it’s.” If you need to fix any instances, enter the correct spelling into the Replace bar and tap “Replace” instead of “Replace All.” Then tap “Find” (or “Find Next”) to advance to the next match.

You can also search for “its” (no apostrophe) to locate where you might need “it’s” instead.

screenshot of a situational global find and replace next
Example: global “Find Next and Replace”
(single replacement)

This feature is also great when you have a name that ends in “s” and needs to be possessive, and you (or your dictation software) keep inserting “s’s” instead of “s’.” Or you can’t remember whether you spelled someone’s name as “Steven” or “Stephen” and used both for the same person.

(Hey, Maurius’ dog might have a grudge against next-door neighbor Steven, but let’s not confuse him with Stephen from the next block over. That could get insulting.)

Additional things you can look for and fix

  • starting sentences with “And” or “But”
  • using “really” or “just” (they’re filler words, and weak)
  • “very” (anything) – “very” is a weak modifier (E.g., “very happy” could be better worded as “delighted” or “ecstatic”)
  • “actually,” “absolutely,” and “obviously” are usually unnecessary
  • no space between an em dash and the word on either side, or between an em dash and quotation marks
  • double dashes are not the same as em dashes

There you have it: faster ways to make a lot of standard revisions. While not comprehensive—most editors have a mental checklist several pages long, as do I—using these handy corrections will help your copy shine. Incidentally, they’ll also help you become a better first draft writer.

Now that’s what I call a win-win situation.

Happy writing!

Blog platforms—which do I use?

notebooks, coffee, and tablet on a table

Howdy! A few people recently asked which blog platform I use and how I got this layout. I could say it’s magic, but truthfully, it’s not. 😉

This is a WordPress blog since that’s the framework my site is built on. Nor is it a custom design, although I did tweak a few of the settings options in my theme and page layouts.

That brings up the inevitable next question of “Why WordPress? And why go with an existing theme rather than creating a custom one?”

Those answers are simple as well. I use WordPress because I’m familiar with it and like the different things I can do within its framework. My site and blog needs are minimal, so I went the DIY route and used available assets to achieve the layout and effects I wanted. It was a little more time-intensive initially, but more cost-effective over the short- and long-term. Certainly a better return on time and cost than if I’d tried to build a similar one from scratch, or hired someone to build it for me. That’s my situation. Your mileage may vary.

Note: I’m not a web designer or programmer by trade. I understand a lot of how to get from that side of things to the end-user side thanks to my previous career. However, don’t ask me to do anything beyond some basics when it comes to coding. That’s not my cuppa, and not how my brain is wired. 😉

Another person mentioned Drupal, wondering if it was a better choice for building a unique blog layout.

The short answer is, it depends on you as the end-user.

Drupal is another solid content management framework and is used to build many websites and blogs. I’m less familiar with it on the end-user side since none of my former clients had websites based on it. However, it’s been around for years and is the top choice for many devs. Some people I’ve talked with prefer it, on personal and professional fronts.

As with all systems, there are pros and cons no matter which you choose. WordPress, Drupal, Joomla, and others all have some great features. Some have steeper learning curves than their brethren. The requirements I specified from the outset—existing familiarity to minimize time sinks, ease of installing and adapting themes, page blocks for layout customization, and several other features—might not be an issue for you.

Bottom line:

When it comes to your website and blog, a balance between your desired look and ease of use/maintenance is usually the path most traveled. It should reflect your business or brand, but also be easy for you to use. Otherwise, it’s a time and energy sink, and possibly a financial one as well.

Reading Outside Your Genre(s): Why, or Why Not?

Whew, it’s been a minute. Holidays, work, getting the accounting stuff in order for tax season (yuck!), dealing with a loss, Zoom meetings, a milestone birthday…time flies when you’re inundated. However! That’s not the focus of what I want to share today.

Here’s what is.

A recent author group post led to a friendly exchange of comments about reading outside your preferred genre(s). Some choose not to unless it’s education specific to their craft and author business. I’m the opposite. Here are two reasons why.

Reading outside your genre(s) – author edition

“I’ll read anything if it interests me enough.”

That’s a comment I’ve made many times in my years. It means that despite having favorite genres, I’ll step outside them if a story catches my attention. Maybe you’ve said and done that too. Or perhaps you’re the opposite and want to know…

Why would I—or anyone else—do that?

The primary answers are straightforward.

One, a story’s title/cover/blurb engaged my attention and offered something I wanted at that time.

Said another way, my inner reader squealed, “Ooh, shiny! I want!” You probably know the next part of the drill… Bam! new story waiting in my Kindle or other reading apps.

Two, it’s exposure to other writing styles.

Each story you read, particularly in genres you’re less familiar with, offers an opportunity to study pacing, technique, descriptions, dialogue, story arc, and all the other craft details that make up a (hopefully) well-told tale. It’s another way to find takeaways that work for you and your stories. You’ll also learn what doesn’t resonate with your style (aka avoiding potentially costly writing mistakes).

Okay, I get that, but why wouldn’t you immerse yourself only in the genres you’re writing?

Good question. There’s nothing that says you can’t. Immersion is generally the best way to internalize everything you need to incorporate in your writing—tropes, character development, world-building, story and series arcs, plot drivers, and all the other nuts and bolts that form a well-crafted tale. Many authors spend a large percentage of their reading time in-genre for that reason.

The flip side of immersion is that it can potentially result in your focus becoming too narrow, and possibly stifling your creative ideas. Conversely, broadening your reading scope can help you think of fresh twists in your work.


Where do you land on the “only my preferred genre(s)” and “I’ll read anything” scale, and why?

Your answers might surprise you.


TL;DR: Reading outside your preferred genre(s), even infrequently, is an opportunity to A) satisfy your need as a reader, B) help you improve your craft by viewing the various story elements through a fresh set of eyes, and C) generate ideas for new twists in your tales. However, don’t count out immersion as a strong way to learn. Both ways offer value.

Stories of Love and Joy During the Holidays

When did the holidays arrive, and where’s my Christmas spirit? AWOL again? Sheesh. Time to go on a “seek and find” mission, 2020 edition. Might have to wrap that troublemaker in toilet paper this year after I find it. You know, for safekeeping. *grin*

I’m currently engaged in my annual debate about putting up my mini tree: Will? Won’t I? Maybe this year I’ll decide before Christmas Eve. Yeah, I know. Bad elf. *slaps wrist* However, I appreciate the holidays in other ways even without the physical trappings.

Since more holiday cheer is always in style, here’s an offering from some writer elves who want to help make the holidays brighter. I’ve already snagged my copy for some cozy reading breaks over the next few weeks.

The Heart of the Season - An ATA Holiday Anthology | book cover image

The Heart of the Season – An ATA Anthology

THE HEART OF THE SEASON is a jolt of joy you cannot wait to unwrap for the holidays. Let your heart be merry and bright as you dive into this multi-genre collection of short stories centered on the themes of love and joy during the holidays.

Explore a foreign café, wild mountain ranges, big city lights, and homey firesides. Keep turning the pages to read the stories of love, redemption, sacrifice, and kindness reminding you that THE HEART OF THE SEASON lives within us all!

Available now on Amazon in ebook and print editions, and on Lulu in ebook (print coming soon).

May your holidays shine bright with the love of family and friends from near and far, and your troubles never outweigh your ability to bear them.

HELLCATS to the Rescue!

Okay, I have no felines in this HELLCATS mix (my overlords are not impressed), but I can get behind wanting to help someone in need. In this case, that simply means purchasing an anthology featuring sixty—yes, sixty—entertaining stories about cats.

What’s this about? In a nutshell, to save Erada’s home. You can read about her struggle in the GoFundMe link (click on the Facebook post image below). Her 16-year-old grandsons launched that appeal and the HELLCATS are doing their bit to help them help her.

I’ve preordered my copy. It looks highly entertaining, in addition to supporting a good cause. Really, you can’t go wrong when some of the best authors in the business team up to give you sixty stories of feline adventure that will keep you enthralled. Revenge, reckoning, and redemption: HELLCATS has it all.

From the Hellcats Anthology Facebook page

About the Hellcats Anthology
Note: clicking this image will take you to Erada’s GoFundMe page
Hellcats anthology cover

Countdown to End of An Era

July 2020 has been a month of craziness and nerves.

  • Pandemic overload? Check.
  • Screwed up sleep and work schedules? Check, and check.
  • Multiple instances of solidifying the knowledge that working from home is my dream? Check.
  • Realizing that you can attain this dream? Gulp. Check.
  • Pulling the trigger and giving notice to the day job of nineteen years? Gulp. HolyshizznitdidIdothat? CHECK.

Yep, I did. I gave my notice at the beginning of the month, and have been wrapping up the mountain of details that accompanies such an event ever since. Oh, man, are there a lot of loose ends when you wear as many hats as I do!

It’s been quite a run over the past almost two decades. I’ve met several great people and learned a lot. I’ve also shared much of that knowledge with others in widely diverse fields and walks of life. I’m good with that. Grateful, even. If it’s helped one person make sense of something, or move forward in their chosen life, I’ve given back as intended.

Now it’s time to take the next steps in my adventure as an editor and writer. I look forward to seeing what lies between the pages of the next chapters, and the marvelous new worlds, characters, and people who await me.

A Work In Progress

New website, new blog…so much conversion to do, so little time to do it.

The word Everything on a To-Do list on a dry erase board to remind you of your tasks, priorities, goals and objectives

But! Progress has been made over the last few days, and eventually, this will be home for my future works of fiction, and probably some “tales from the trenches” posts as well. After all, I live in both worlds—editor and writer. It’s difficult not to come up with anecdotes. *wink*

Uh-oh… I hear deadlines yelling at me.

Looks like that’s the news that’s fit to print. The rest has been heavily edited. *grin*

Until later!

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Pssst! It’s time…for this week’s edition of LMBPN’s Fan Pricing Saturday! Grab ‘em quick and pull up your favorite reading spot, because there’s more here than meets the eye. 😉

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Dark Reunion – https://books2read.com/u/bpEMnz

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All’s Fair in War – https://books2read.com/u/4NQD5o

Happy reading!