Simple fixes for common editing mistakes

You’ve written a book. Or an article, a blog post, or another version of prose content. You’ve tweaked it until your eyes crossed and sent it for feedback, confident it conveys your story or message.

Except…you still see those pesky grammar and spelling error indicators in your digital document, and your review team is leaving notes that say, “run global edits.”

We’ve all been there. Many people say this is their least favorite part of the creation process. However, you can use some simple tricks to streamline the revision slog, polish your copy—and not lose your sanity while doing it.

Globals, or global corrections

Also called global edits, “running globals” is the fast way to find and replace multiple instances of commonly misspelled, misused, or unnecessary words and phrases.

It applies to most forms of writing and is particularly handy for book manuscripts and other long-form content. You can also have content- or author-specific globals, but as the terms imply, they’re more focused than the ones covered here.

blank Find and Replace screenshot

Note: this technique assumes that your software has a Find and Replace or Advanced Find and Replace feature. Microsoft Word, OpenOffice, LibreOffice, and most other office suite products do. TextEdit, Notes, blog platforms, and specialty writing programs might not.

Ready? Let’s dive into some of the most common mistakes and how to change them in only a few clicks.

Editing Replacements and Corrections

Errors to replace globally

FindReplace
forwardsforward
towardstoward
backwardsbackward
onwardsonward
upwardsupward
looked tolooked at
looked over tolooked at
looked to beappeared to be
replied backreplied
smiled tosmiled at
smiled to himself/herselfsmiled
alright
(NOT A WORD!)
all right
(Match Case, often at the beginning of a sentence but not always)
fell/knelt/squatted/crouched downfell/knelt/squatted/crouched
nodded his/her headnodded
waved his/her handswaved
folded/crossed his arms over his chest
(or her arms)
folded/crossed his arms
(or her arms)
Double space (hit the space bar twice)Single space (hit the space bar once)
^t (tab)Blank (don’t put anything in)
^l (soft return)^p (paragraph break)
^p^p then try ^p ^p (with a space between)^p

Go through these with a Find Next and Replace if needed (occasionally, it’s correct as it stands)

FindReplace
wrapped upwrapped
opened upopened
turned/spun/whirled aroundturned/spun/whirled
it’sits (situationally)
called outcalled, unless “I feel called out” or something similar
stood upstood, unless “stood up to bullies” or something similar
stand upstand (see qualifier for “stood”)
.” H or .” S or .” T,” h or s or t
(use Match Case) (happens in dialogue tags)
!” H or S or T!” h or s or t
(use Match Case) (occurs in dialogue tags)
,”.”
E.g., “Blah blah blah,” he smiled s/b “Blah blah blah.” He smiled.
Make sure you’re using a dialogue verb (smirked and sighed are not)
Ellipses have no space after unless it starts a new sentence.

Globals in action

Now that we have the lists, here’s an example of a global find and replace in action. In this instance, the search phrase “nodded his head” pulled up four matches. Since this is an automatic correction rather than situational, typing “nodded” in the Replace bar and tapping “Replace All” will fix all four instances with one click.

screenshot of a global Find and Replace example
Example: global “Find and Replace All”

If you need to Match Case, the gear icon next to “Find” gives you that option, plus other advanced features.

(Note: screenshots reflect the layout in Word for Mac, Office 365. The PC interface for Word, Office 365 is a popup window under Advanced Find and Replace with separate tabs for “Find” and “Replace.”)

Next is a situational global (Find Next and Replace) for “it’s.” If you need to fix any instances, enter the correct spelling into the Replace bar and tap “Replace” instead of “Replace All.” Then tap “Find” (or “Find Next”) to advance to the next match.

You can also search for “its” (no apostrophe) to locate where you might need “it’s” instead.

screenshot of a situational global find and replace next
Example: global “Find Next and Replace”
(single replacement)

This feature is also great when you have a name that ends in “s” and needs to be possessive, and you (or your dictation software) keep inserting “s’s” instead of “s’.” Or you can’t remember whether you spelled someone’s name as “Steven” or “Stephen” and used both for the same person.

(Hey, Maurius’ dog might have a grudge against next-door neighbor Steven, but let’s not confuse him with Stephen from the next block over. That could get insulting.)

Additional things you can look for and fix

  • starting sentences with “And” or “But”
  • using “really” or “just” (they’re filler words, and weak)
  • “very” (anything) – “very” is a weak modifier (E.g., “very happy” could be better worded as “delighted” or “ecstatic”)
  • “actually,” “absolutely,” and “obviously” are usually unnecessary
  • no space between an em dash and the word on either side, or between an em dash and quotation marks
  • double dashes are not the same as em dashes

There you have it: faster ways to make a lot of standard revisions. While not comprehensive—most editors have a mental checklist several pages long, as do I—using these handy corrections will help your copy shine. Incidentally, they’ll also help you become a better first draft writer.

Now that’s what I call a win-win situation.

Happy writing!

Cool Gifts for Indie Authors and Creative Writers (and those who know them!)

One of the neat things about being connected with authors and fans is getting the scoop when they launch new endeavors.

In this case, it’s a cool (relatively) new online store created by an author, for authors (and those who support/appreciate/work with them) offering a wide assortment of mugs, spiral bound notebooks and t-shirts that are perfect for indie authors, creative writers, editors, ghostwriters, cover artists…the whole shebang.

Head on over to the Write Stuff store and check it out. Hint: this could make your holiday shopping a little easier. 😉

Here are some pics of the merch to tickle your curiosity.

 

 

Books to check out – 10/26/18

Welcome to the next edition of the semi-regular “Books to check out” posts. Here you’ll find links to some of the many books, in a variety of genres, that have recently crossed my Kindle and/or computer screen. Oh, and in case you’re wondering: no, I don’t get paid (or any other form of compensation) for posting these links and descriptions. Yes, I buy the books (or borrow them through Kindle Unlimited).

Happy reading!

Twisted: A Collection of Dark Tales by Daniel Willcocks. If horror and thriller stories are right up your alley, then here’s an early Halloween treat you won’t want to miss! You may or may not want to leave the lights on when you go to bed…

Twisted-A-Collection-of-Dark-Tales_cover-thumbnailDesperate for a fresh injection of dark tales designed to make the mind bend, warp, and TWIST?

For the first time ever in one collection, ‘Twisted’ collates 28 of the best dark horror shorts featured on the chart-busting, award-nominated podcast, ‘The Other Stories’ (plus a few cheeky extras stories thrown in).

If you like short bursts of dark fiction designed to make your eyes pop and your sphincter tighten, well… this is a collection for you.

Stories including, but not limited to: Gas-fuelled nightmare chambers, parasitic crustaceans, bloody tribal rituals, serial-killing pensioners, and possessed theme parks.

Strange Is Her Life by Judith Berens, Martha Carr, and Michael Anderle. Book 6 in the School of Necessary Magic series, this urban fantasy tale is part of the Oriceran Universe and follows the adventures of teenager Alison Brownstone and her friends.

Strange-Is-Her-Life_cover-thumbnailDark magic has infiltrated the School of Necessary Magic.

Spies stalk the halls. Traitors whisper lies to impressionable freshmen.

And devious wizards distract with charming smiles.

If Alison and her friends can’t see past the friendly masks of their fellow students to the dark purpose they hide, it’s not just the school that will be destroyed.

But the forces of evil should have kept one thing in mind before targeting Alison Brownstone.

Hell hath no fury like a Drow princess defending her family.

Shocker by William Graves. Currently sitting at #20 in the Horror Suspense category on Amazon, this book has been getting fantastic reviews from readers for its skillfully written storyline and relatable, everyday characters. As one reviewer described it, “Complex, nerve-wracking, grabs your emotions and won’t let go till the very end.”

Shocker_cover-thumbnailWhat happens when the demons of the past come back to play?

Mary Elizabeth carries a dark secret in her heart, one she keeps even from herself.

Her husband, Charlie, ignorant of the horror she’s buried deep, watches with sadness as indifference and apathy fracture their picture-perfect family.

Will the truth set you free or get you killed?

The body—a girl, barely fourteen, used then butchered—is found on the bluff high above main street.

Mary Elizabeth’s visceral reaction to the news—out of character for the stoic, almost cold woman he’s loved since high school—shakes Charlie out of his passivity.

But when he reaches to reconnect and fight for the life they once had, it only serves to drive her further away and him into the arms of another.

She’s the hero no one sees coming.

Another death, this one closer to home, brings to surface memories Mary Elizabeth has long denied exist.

As a killer—brutal, efficient, unstoppable—continues to terrorize their small town, she alone holds the power to stop him.

Because she knows him.

She survived him.

And he remembers her—in vivid, electrifying detail.

An emotionally gripping psychological thriller that “will make you laugh out loud and then want to lock your front door before you read another page.”

Masters of Fate by A.K. DuBoff. Book 3 in the Dark Stars trilogy is newly-released. New enough, in fact, that it’s sitting on my TBR list screaming “read me!” Lol. However, I expect it to be a fantastic read in the sci-fi/fantasy space opera genre; word on the street from those who’ve already devoured it agrees.

Masters-of-Fate_cover-thumbnailThe final fight will change their perception forever.

Everything Elle Hartmut and her friends thought they knew about the alien menace—and the nature of their universe—is wrong.

With mounting evidence that the aliens behind the Darkness reside on a hyperdimensional plane above spacetime, Elle and the Dark Sentinels will need a new approach to win. However, preventing the impending alien invasion will test their team in ways they never imagined.

The ancient artifacts wielded by the Dark Sentinels may hold the key to victory. If they can understand and master their true abilities, they may still be able to save the Hegemony and their loved ones before the invasion’s final stage consumes them all.

The Dark Stars trilogy combines high-tech sci-fi with traditional fantasy magic, perfect for fans of Final FantasyStar Ocean, and Xenosaga. Join Elle in her final battle against the Darkness!

Superdreadnought 1 by CH Gideon and Tim Marquitz, Craig Martelle, and Michael Anderle. This military AI space opera is set in the greater Kurtherian Gambit Universe and is both the start of a new series and an exploration of what happens when an AI who’s been waiting in isolation, untasked, heads back out into the universe.

Superdreadnought-1_cover-thumbnailAlone and unafraid. Sometimes you prevent war by hunting down your enemies.

Integrated with a superdreadnought, the artificial intelligence known as Reynolds takes his ship across the universe in search of the elusive Kurtherians. He comes to a revelation. He’s better in the company of living creatures.

He needs a crew. He needs information. And he needs to continue his search and destroy mission.

Needing a crew and getting a crew are two completely different things. Reynolds is out of his element as he tries to reach out and make friends. Through it all, he has his vessel, the superdreadnought, the most powerful warship in the galaxy.

Or so he believes.